Day 11

11/26/2013

im giving an update on our lizard we finally digged everything up and we found him we are taking out the mouse because everythng keeps getting messed up we started to start over on our biome we are trying to get things fixed up to where everything is right.

3 Comments

Dr. Maddie Ross

11/26/2013 12:20:42 am

Meagan, sorry I haven't been asking questions lately. First of all, where did day 7 go? I was looking forward to reading the comments, but it no longer exists. What did the mouse to do have to make you start completely over on your biome? Did you think your lizard died? You really need to be paying attention to your grammatical errors. You need to have someone proof read your blog posts before posting them. You need to be putting more detail into your posts. Blogs posts are suppose to be at least a paragraph long, which in 5 sentences at the least. I would to see some pictures posted along with the blog posts.

Dr. Rita Neupane

11/26/2013 12:23:26 am

Why did you have to dig up your lizard? Why do you think your mouse is messing everything up? Why did you have to start over?

You need to be more detailed in your updates. Please use full sentences and check your grammar please. If you need a good example look at Sarah Garner's blog. You need to drop in more effort into your blog postings.

Dr. Rita Neupane

meagan shackelford

11/26/2013 02:50:52 am

We thought our lizard died but sarah was digging up some dirt and she found him he just digged a big tunnal in the biome and we are not having a mouse anymore becasue she digged everything up that we already growed so we had to start all over on our biome thats why we took the mouse out because he was messing stuff up.

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